Eric's Assigment 1.2.2006 by Michelle and Ben:

plot points for the section you are writing next [we came up with these in last week's rehearsal, remember?]:

we have left off with Daisy’s brit punk band…

next there is:

sudden violence and fighting

a secret rendezvous or two (two would be better)
- during this secret rendezvous or two, “hidden” people (probably harry and daisy) are watching
- this section includes the “17” scene

harry turns out to be a bad guy in a surprise twist
with
more violence and fighting

daisy falls in love
- during bar fight scene, which also includes daisy/bad guy “date” (bad guy is an extra)

an apache dance

clarence brings daisy back to life

this section should also include:

- someone using British accent as code (lift from co/lab)
- someone dies by papercut
- white paint
- a shoe box sighting (not a main focus)
- a boom mike
- an unexpected source of light
- rhyming couplets
- green shoelaces

- And the following pieces:

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He takes out his false teeth, picks a piece of lettuce out of them, puts them back in. Looks around furtively.

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Getting the biggest Bang for your Buck
Is like
The Biggest Bang for your Buck there is.
I’m all about value, baby.
You are a gem, baby, reasonably flawless
Like a yellow carbuncle bought at a flea market
That turns out to be worth more than 50 dollars.
You are smart, and pretty.
And those are qualities that I like.
Also, you have great fashion sense.

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Daisy: That was beautiful.
Bad guy: So. You wanna be my girlfriend?
Daisy: I thought we already established that when I told you I was paying.
Bad guy: Oh. Okay.

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A woman passes them, walking quickly. She is wearing a camo hunting jacket, carrying a digital camera, and smoking. She bumps into [someone’s] shoulder.

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